Cycling has many benefits, yet in some countries there is a decrease in numbers of people using bicycles as their main form of transportation. Why is it happening? Give suggestions how to encourage people to use bicycles again.
The issue of not using bicycles as the major source of transportation becomes the biggest concern in many countries in the world. Despite a dramatic increase in the traffic rate, a tremendous number of people still use cars as the main vehicle, causing harm to both environment and themselves. In this an attempt, will be made to investigate and represent possible solutions to the given problem.
Admittedly, it is common to believe that doing cycle can detrimentally affect human being's role in society. In other words, if a person does not posses a car, and instead of buying one, rides a bicycle, people tend to suppose that this individual has low income and very poor living conditions, and thereupon is not even barely able to allow purchasing the car. Moreover, current lifestyles of many people simple do not imply the concept of healthiness, and, thus, making equally men and women become less fit, and destroying any eagerness to do sports, especially riding bicycles.
To encourage citizens alter their point of view, and the attitude towards the issue of cycling, in general, firstly, a government should impose higher taxes on car owners, so that they do not have a choice, but changing their car to bicycle. Secondly, if previous solution does not help, then focus should be put not on physical incitement, but on spiritual, or moral one. What I mean by this, is that more educational programmes, that are intended to let people know how they are going to preserve planet from the hazardous exhaust gas the cars produce, should be introduced to the contemporary community. Last but not least, widening roads for the cyclers should take place, in order to convince people about the safety of cycling, and the minimum accidents it can give rise to.
To conclude, it is not challenging to encourage people to switch from cars to bicycles, but time, and government's willingness and effort should be involved to make people think in favor of environment, safety and longevity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
...ng cycle can detrimentally affect human beings role in society. In other words, if a p...
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Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encouraging'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: encouraging
.... To conclude, it is not challenging to encourage people to switch from cars to bicycles,...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'thus', 'i mean', 'in general', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.22691292876 0.247107183377 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.174142480211 0.155533422707 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0791556728232 0.0946595960268 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0633245382586 0.0501214627716 126% => OK
Pronouns: 0.023746701847 0.0437548338989 54% => OK
Prepositions: 0.100263852243 0.122226691241 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0474934036939 0.0403226058552 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74185192638 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0501319261214 0.0326793684256 153% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0791556728232 0.0861772015684 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0211081794195 0.021408717616 99% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00791556728232 0.011925033212 66% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1992.0 1933.35771543 103% => OK
No of words: 333.0 316.048096192 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98198198198 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.372372372372 0.374742101984 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.258258258258 0.28420135186 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.201201201201 0.203846283523 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123123123123 0.137316102897 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74185192638 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.037074148 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636636636637 0.56093040696 113% => OK
Word variations: 77.5750774622 60.7387585426 128% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 30.2727272727 20.7743622355 146% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0004591349 49.517814964 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.090909091 127.492653851 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2727272727 20.7743622355 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.27272727273 0.814263465372 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 56.0985530986 49.1944974215 114% => OK
Elegance: 1.43434343434 1.69124875643 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331574590217 0.332605444948 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116086735817 0.102741220458 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0613983431937 0.0668466124924 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.623841795944 0.534860350844 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.177728962284 0.148594505496 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154607456362 0.134430193775 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689019179778 0.0742795772207 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.341765499953 0.324371583561 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0233409828232 0.0638462369009 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243341022825 0.228012699653 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364576567314 0.058150111329 63% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.