The chart below shows the percentage of children aged 0 to 5 and adults aged 60 and over, selected Census years.
The chart represents the proportion of population by two age groups (0 to 15 and 0 and over) from 1911 to 2011.
Overall, the children’s population decreased whereas the older population increased as the time passes by.
Looking in details for younger groups, there was the highest proportion of population was recorded at the beginning of the projected period. About 32% of population was recorded in 1911. This continued to decrease to reach at 25% in 1931 and below 25% in 1961. By 2011, the children aged from 0 to 15 had accounted of about 18% of total population.
In contrast, there was the lowest proportion for older groups of about 8% in 1911. This percentage constantly increased; about 11% in 1931, about 17% in 1961 and just above 20% in 1991. By 2011, the proportion for over 60 years of people had recorded at close to 25% out of total population.
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Discourse Markers used:
['look', 'whereas', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.204419889503 0.268076937826 76% => OK
Verbs: 0.104972375691 0.116061578633 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0441988950276 0.0759168565197 58% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0331491712707 0.0366838410393 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.21546961326 0.155750635184 138% => OK
Participles: 0.0386740331492 0.0379272487307 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80882531563 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0331491712707 0.0210936926555 157% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0718232044199 0.0948980150116 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 869.0 1161.00487805 75% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.9 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71710526316 5.90752243213 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73763899035 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.269736842105 0.337110787985 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.236842105263 0.247514529752 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.190789473684 0.171178102325 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.151315789474 0.112407865282 135% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80882531563 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.546246751206 96% => OK
Word variations: 41.7842341472 49.3433353143 85% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.8888888889 23.0094962315 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.6288803145 42.9750493124 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5555555556 135.714022679 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 23.0094962315 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.689975730869 48% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 40.5730994152 47.7609492067 85% => OK
Elegance: 3.32 2.94281807926 113% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339467813177 0.418131533498 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.160621861488 0.181151798455 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.1011613874 0.0850326197045 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.657331993544 0.706616315825 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.199432078166 0.157042692854 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161934691543 0.228904883108 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926989172966 0.108899403657 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.361250370056 0.367819155151 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.186483724728 0.0812612215331 229% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242430162983 0.316326947829 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711303601444 0.0921553760075 77% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.