An international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. While seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be paid subsidies for farming the new variety of millet. Since millet is already a staple food in Tagus, people will readily adopt the new variety. To combat vitamin A deficiency, the government of Tagus should do everything it can to promote this new type of millet.
Vitamin A is a quite essential factor required for synchronized and orderly growth of a human body. Its the result of advanced research in food technology that has resulted into such millet with reach content of Vitamin A. in the text author has explained about the content and cost of the developed seed.
But in addition to the information given it should be mentioned about the chances of growth of these type of seeds. Because only containing a good quality of vitamin does not owns a product to be subsidized or distributed. its the probability of getting grains from these types of seeds that decides it effectiveness.
Rather question may be asked about the ability of the millet to assert with various climate changes. With the recent effect of pollution and industrialization it is the global warming that is causing flood or drought in an unpredictable situation. Definitely these are creating problems in the normal leaving of human beings.Obviously cultivation largely depends on this.So these dependability on weather condition should be properly mentioned.
Moreover the cost effectiveness.One may ask about the usability of the extra money to be spent on these seeds. What is the additional content of the vitamin should be published to the people accurately.Its after all matter of money that one have to spend, whether it may be the government or the common people.
So in addition to the given data about the new seed some of the above mentioned points may be made public for easier acceptance.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'after all', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262357414449 0.25644967241 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.15969581749 0.15541462614 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0760456273764 0.0836205057962 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0342205323194 0.0520304965353 66% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0228136882129 0.0272364105082 84% => OK
Prepositions: 0.163498098859 0.125424944231 130% => OK
Participles: 0.06463878327 0.0416121511921 155% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.02642027731 2.79052419416 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0266159695817 0.026700313972 100% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.133079847909 0.113004496875 118% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0266159695817 0.0255425247493 104% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0152091254753 0.0127820249294 119% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1520.0 2731.13054187 56% => OK
No of words: 251.0 446.07635468 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.05577689243 6.12365571057 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.57801047555 87% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.378486055777 0.378187486979 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.274900398406 0.287650121315 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.167330677291 0.208842608468 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119521912351 0.135150697306 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02642027731 2.79052419416 108% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 207.018472906 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573705179283 0.469332199767 122% => OK
Word variations: 57.665430928 52.1807786196 111% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.039408867 55% => OK
Sentence length: 22.8181818182 23.2022227129 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4943987059 57.7814097925 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.181818182 141.986410481 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 23.2022227129 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 0.724660767414 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 3.58251231527 391% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 50.3082216588 51.9672348444 97% => OK
Elegance: 2.26315789474 1.8405768891 123% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39002895381 0.441005458295 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.126296495709 0.135418324435 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.086828721645 0.0829849096947 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.689498584522 0.58762219726 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.173267775657 0.147661913831 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185978546091 0.193483328276 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652953688508 0.0970749176394 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.383498872894 0.42659136922 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0382135349736 0.0774707102158 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260808180872 0.312017818177 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438749702991 0.0698173142475 63% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.33743842365 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.87684729064 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.82512315271 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 6.46551724138 93% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 5.36822660099 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 14.657635468 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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