Some people believe that any one can create art such as painting, poetry, music and so on. Others thinks that a person should have special abilities to create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Art is something which comes directly from the heart and the artist is the one, who will just displays his hearts words onto a paper, in the form of picture or a poetry etc. In my opinion, to be an artist, it requires regular practice for all to achieve certain level.
Firstly, there are some people who think that to be an artist is such easy as walking on the park. Yes, many of them can do that, but to achieve that they simply have to do daily exercise. By doing the practice in particular art will give a tremendous success. From this point of view anyone can get the attainment what they desire.
But on the other hand, there are certain mankind’s, who thinks that to have a great triumph in art, person should have special abilities. An individual with such abilities does not required, such rehearse as normal do. They have unique vision to approach for the particular laurel. They can easily grab each small detail, where as normal’s cannot do. For example, a person who is hardworking and do regular practice will get good success, but at certain level he might lack. Where on other hand an individual with the special skills will have no worry, because of the power that he has.
So, last but not the least I want to conclude that, and art is something, which requires a lots of skills, hard work, practice as well as the abilities to learn it quick .It is , not simply a piece of cake even for the person who has special skills, an individual can lack if they do not practice regularly. That is why someone said “PRACTICE MAKES A MAN PERFECT".
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'require'
Suggestion: require
...individual with such abilities does not required, such rehearse as normal do. They have ...
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Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...They can easily grab each small detail, where as normal's cannot do. For example, a...
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Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...t, and art is something, which requires a lots of skills, hard work, practice as well ...
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Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... well as the abilities to learn it quick .It is , not simply a piece of cake even ...
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Line 7, column 172, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ell as the abilities to learn it quick .It is , not simply a piece of cake even fo...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s the abilities to learn it quick .It is , not simply a piece of cake even for the...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'in particular', 'as well as', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21130952381 0.247107183377 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.145833333333 0.155533422707 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0863095238095 0.0946595960268 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0505952380952 0.0501214627716 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0386904761905 0.0437548338989 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.104166666667 0.122226691241 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0119047619048 0.0403226058552 30% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.51394467807 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0267857142857 0.0326793684256 82% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.10119047619 0.0861772015684 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0327380952381 0.021408717616 153% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0327380952381 0.011925033212 275% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1587.0 1933.35771543 82% => OK
No of words: 286.0 316.048096192 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54895104895 6.12580529183 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.27972027972 0.374742101984 75% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.202797202797 0.28420135186 71% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.129370629371 0.203846283523 63% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0699300699301 0.137316102897 51% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51394467807 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.037074148 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562937062937 0.56093040696 100% => OK
Word variations: 58.4575517464 60.7387585426 96% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.4285714286 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0508760977 49.517814964 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.357142857 127.492653851 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.785714285714 0.814263465372 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 40.7082917083 49.1944974215 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.39240506329 1.69124875643 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24131998973 0.332605444948 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0728647243287 0.102741220458 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0692568556362 0.0668466124924 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.479523351243 0.534860350844 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166320557736 0.148594505496 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939107009719 0.134430193775 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603484676168 0.0742795772207 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.339729504852 0.324371583561 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0353418359331 0.0638462369009 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164477857206 0.228012699653 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470067618955 0.058150111329 81% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 10.4468937876 57% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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