"Much of the information that people assume is 'factual' actually turns out to be inaccurate.
Thus, any piece of information referred to as a 'fact' should be mistrusted since it may well be
proven false in the future."
The author asserts that people whose assume fact as accurate results turns out to be inaccurate sometimes, he asserts that any piece of information which is considered as fact may be proven false in the future state. I strongly agree with the author that facts present today may not be present tomorrow.
First of all facts which we consider are beliefs and truths may not be facts that last long forever.Facts are mutable.Facts that are present today may not be present tomorrow.For example during the earlier century when christianity evolved earth was considered as center of the universe and sun revolved around it. But with the advent of the telescope Galilieo turned down this fact with some scientific experiments and later concluded that earth was not the center but instead it was the sun,this implies that the fact that was present previous years ago was not the fact which is present now. Similarly on the same account facts like the person who got elected as the president of America may not hold true for future years ago.These facts are mutable and are not constant, so people believing this kind of facts must look into the truth and into documentation more clearly.
On the other hand some facts are immutable, facts like time, Time waits for none you cannot change time, once it is passed u cannot go into previous state.Some facts you should accept as facts no matter whether they are true or false.Because nobody else has witnessed these facts. For example people believe after death people will enter into holistic places known as Hell and Heaven, but since nobody ever has experienced such entrance to places are alive we must consider them as facts no matter how long they hold true.
In sum, i like to conclude the some facts are mutable are not long lasting ,facts which are present today may not be present tomorrow,some facts are immutable cannot be changed and there are some facts that we should consider them as fact no matter for how long they are true,as such it is with people who has to choose which are the facts and which are not depends on the intwrest of the individual extincts and emotions.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'similarly', 'so', 'as to', 'for example', 'kind of', 'first of all', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.225316455696 0.240241500013 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.184810126582 0.157235817809 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101265822785 0.0880659088768 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0708860759494 0.0497285424764 143% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0405063291139 0.0444667217837 91% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118987341772 0.12292977631 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0253164556962 0.0406280797675 62% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.37988435122 2.79330140395 85% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0101265822785 0.030933414821 33% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00506329113924 0.0016655270985 304% => OK
Determiners: 0.0860759493671 0.0997080785238 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0354430379747 0.0249443105267 142% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0379746835443 0.0148568991511 256% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2133.0 2732.02544248 78% => OK
No of words: 370.0 452.878318584 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76486486486 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.310810810811 0.366273622748 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.208108108108 0.280924506359 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.124324324324 0.200843997647 62% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0783783783784 0.132149295362 59% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37988435122 2.79330140395 85% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 219.290929204 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481081081081 0.48968727796 98% => OK
Word variations: 50.6901570595 55.4138127331 91% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6194690265 39% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 46.25 23.380412469 198% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 89.0967697226 59.4972553346 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 266.625 141.124799967 189% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.25 23.380412469 198% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.5 0.674092028746 223% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.21349557522 307% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 67.0608108108 51.4728631049 130% => OK
Elegance: 1.24786324786 1.64882698954 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2051727734 0.391690518653 52% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.250178997142 0.123202303941 203% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0708145207367 0.077325440228 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.745204974559 0.547984918172 136% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.126313999688 0.149214159877 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131717207434 0.161403998019 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905792183311 0.0892212321368 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.365697073781 0.385218514788 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0790218614103 0.0692045440612 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170087047301 0.275328986314 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095205009757 0.0653680567796 146% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 13.5995575221 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.