With an increasing number of people eating fast food, which if eating too regularly can cause health issues, some people think that the only solution is to ban it completely.
To what extent do you agree?
Over the last decades, a growing number of people tend to eat junk food, consumption of which may lead to health problems. While some believe that in order to solve this case, authorities have to ban it totally, I do not think that it is possible and consider that governments should promote the adverse effects of consuming those foods.
Banning to eat fast food for those who consume it on a regular basis is not the solution. Firstly, prohibiting the junk food does not mean that all people will not be able to it anymore. Since virtually the all can cook any sort of food, it will not be a pro...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...problem will not be solved completely. In order to solve this problem, governme...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...roblems in those consumers may occur as some of the threatening diseases. Furthermore, the ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'however', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'while', 'sort of', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.204545454545 0.247107183377 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.175324675325 0.155533422707 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0519480519481 0.0946595960268 55% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0746753246753 0.0501214627716 149% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0487012987013 0.0437548338989 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133116883117 0.122226691241 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0324675324675 0.0403226058552 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72193846577 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0324675324675 0.0326793684256 99% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.11038961039 0.0861772015684 128% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0422077922078 0.021408717616 197% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0194805194805 0.011925033212 163% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1657.0 1933.35771543 86% => OK
No of words: 279.0 316.048096192 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93906810036 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.336917562724 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.272401433692 0.28420135186 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.175627240143 0.203846283523 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118279569892 0.137316102897 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72193846577 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.037074148 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480286738351 0.56093040696 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.9975455201 60.7387585426 76% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 25.3636363636 20.7743622355 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2414475831 49.517814964 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.636363636 127.492653851 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7743622355 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.909090909091 0.814263465372 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 52.6037797328 49.1944974215 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.23913043478 1.69124875643 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338194688899 0.332605444948 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.144700371471 0.102741220458 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0472458442882 0.0668466124924 71% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.666006649331 0.534860350844 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0732293010979 0.148594505496 49% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169291568294 0.134430193775 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470149623409 0.0742795772207 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.387111856323 0.324371583561 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0556983207227 0.0638462369009 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250978196696 0.228012699653 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548332942864 0.058150111329 94% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.68436873747 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 5.90881763527 17% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.