You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
tell him which team won
describe the conditions on the day
say how you felt about the match
Dear Frank,
I was so sorry to hear about your accident! I hope you're feeling a lot better today and that it's not too boring in hospital.
The match on Saturday was disappointing. The score was 2 all, probably because you weren't there to score that extra goal! The awful thing was that we were winning until 10 minutes before the end, when suddenly they scored another goal. I was so shocked when I saw the ball hit the back of the net.
I think the weather was to blame. It was a really wet day and the pitch was very muddy. By the end of the game you could hardly see the grass and we were sliding around in the mud. Everyone was exhausted.
Let us know when you're going home and we'll arrange for someone to bring you to watch the next game. The rest of the team send their regards and we all wish you a speedy recovery.
Best wishes,
Charlie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'all' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'alls'.
Suggestion: alls
...rday was disappointing. The score was 2 all, probably because you weren't ther...
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Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...'t there to score that extra goal! The awful thing was that we were winning un...
^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['really', 'so', 'as to', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.175 0.220444632235 79% => OK
Verbs: 0.2 0.167888034529 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.05 0.0606518309736 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.055 0.0506257000042 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.11 0.118615021944 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.07 0.107062808482 65% => OK
Participles: 0.03 0.041066498444 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.30687743968 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.025 0.0385302599488 65% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.115 0.0714148451538 161% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.005 0.0191574576366 26% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.015 0.00930345855455 161% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 885.0 1141.60824742 78% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.134020619 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39634146341 5.53046319177 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78085437643 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.231707317073 0.284621296913 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.164634146341 0.211203875043 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0853658536585 0.133321485273 64% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0609756097561 0.0843313296314 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30687743968 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676829268293 0.622163163488 109% => OK
Word variations: 69.1499629019 62.8969750728 110% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 12.9587628866 100% => OK
Sentence length: 12.6153846154 16.4300151701 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4154663242 44.7399317507 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0769230769 90.9928171075 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6153846154 16.4300151701 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.307692307692 0.613754768223 50% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.09278350515 96% => OK
Readability: 29.0787992495 37.5504026743 77% => OK
Elegance: 0.753424657534 1.13073093955 67% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344114683331 0.331212695627 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0712577444601 0.0927372745006 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0646203940216 0.0736520305886 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.589885479433 0.579516596996 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136468442546 0.180689518051 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131992718881 0.122183219658 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777676727053 0.0765303033291 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.300888398282 0.211926503985 142% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.150700345746 0.0737400523855 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239728339985 0.203819188451 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405629480625 0.067151250289 60% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.45360824742 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.48453608247 337% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.0206185567 99% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 4.73195876289 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.03092783505 97% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 8.32989690722 60% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.