Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best things in the life do not cost money. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is true that most goods today require more money, but the best moments of our life can be formed just a few dollars such as visiting nature or spending time in special occasions like birthday.
There are a couple of reasons why I support the best events in everyone’s life do not cost more money. One of them is a visiting nature. For this purpose, it is enough to pay for the ticket and foods. My experience may be interesting. About six months ago which was coincident with my graduation day from university, a couple of my friends and I planned to leave home to camp in our neighborhood for hunting for three days, where was only fifty kilometers away from my home. The only expense that we had to pay for gasoline and foods such as roast meat and so on. During our staying over there, for two hours we had a long walking to find prey such as goat. After hunting, we grilled the goat’s succulent meat and for the rest of day by walking through forest, namely national parks, we just listened to warbling of birds. So, this kind of entertainment do not cost money and keep in our mind all the time.
Another activity in our life that do not need more money, I think, is to spend time with our friends or families. When we get together for celebration or anything else just with little money we can have a good and memorable time. The best example for this can be my birthday celebration. My siblings, together with my classmates, calibrate my birthday, by dancing, playing favorite games, or even saying jokes to each other. When I remember that day, I get more energy to keep on my life.
Finally, I love hunting and walking in the nature, because such kind of events give me more motivation and remind in my mind forever, and also they do not actually require lots of money to have a good time.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'finally', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'i think', 'kind of', 'such as', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227513227513 0.229887763892 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.145502645503 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0846560846561 0.0866891130778 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0555555555556 0.046263068375 120% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0846560846561 0.0685040099705 124% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126984126984 0.118717715034 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0343915343915 0.0351676179071 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.47087992194 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.026455026455 0.0309702414327 85% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0582010582011 0.0887237588012 66% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.010582010582 0.0209618222197 50% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.015873015873 0.0139019557991 114% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1814.0 2387.08602151 76% => OK
No of words: 334.0 408.028673835 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43113772455 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.278443113772 0.338922669872 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.203592814371 0.251872472559 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.125748502994 0.174417080927 72% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0658682634731 0.112833075102 58% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47087992194 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553892215569 0.524397521467 106% => OK
Word variations: 60.0188251136 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 20.875 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.401262404 48.84282405 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.375 120.699889404 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6875 0.644075263715 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 41.2342814371 45.7405998639 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.36111111111 1.45489161554 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30327953552 0.300154397459 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125970283037 0.103427244359 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0660080217079 0.0752933317313 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.478137147726 0.497263757937 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.227563199523 0.151897553556 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118829452711 0.114077575197 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928885632947 0.0781384742642 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.232413741691 0.336927656856 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0657051177392 0.067059652881 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19967030715 0.210909579961 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473603397337 0.0618886996521 77% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.