Nowadays many offenders suffering from health problems such as obesity. What are reasons behind it and how it can be solved?
In this modern era, there is various health problems occurred such as obesity, weak optical, back pain and so on. This is a growing concern in prisons especially a huge proportion of offenders suffer from those types of health issues. There are various reasons for this health issue but the primary reason could be the eating habits and changes in lifestyles. To solve this issue, regular daily exercises and other approaches should be used.
There are multifarious causes behind this phenomenon. The first and foremost, a growing demand for fast food has caused various diseases and which raises this issue. To consume fast food is harmful for immune and digestive systems. Along with this, using excessive amount of modern technologies causes numerous types of health hazards.
At present, people are easily accesses with modern technologies and which have changed their lifestyles drastically. Modern technologies provide a lot of diversify information that can be either educational or entertainment so that people can easily addict to this modernised device. Due to this, people can suffer from various health issues such as back pain, obesity, weak eye sight and so on.
To solve this, the government or the prison facilities should provide regular exercising programs so that offenders can maintain fit. As a result, offenders can have a fruitful lifestyle for remain fit and healthy. Apart from this, giving a proper guidance for using of modern technologies would be recommended. Thus, criminals can enjoy strongest life.
In conclusion, the modern society affected on people’s daily lifestyles and due to this, there are several health problems and solutions. The causes for this could be various but the main reason is the fast food and modern technological lifestyles. It is therefore, important to use the exercising programs and the supervision approaches.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...issues such as back pain, obesity, weak eye sight and so on. To solve this, the governm...
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Line 4, column 333, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'enjoy the strongest'.
Suggestion: enjoy the strongest
...uld be recommended. Thus, criminals can enjoy strongest life. In conclusion, the modern socie...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'apart from', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.250746268657 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.128358208955 0.155533422707 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.146268656716 0.0946595960268 155% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0388059701493 0.0501214627716 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00597014925373 0.0437548338989 14% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.0955223880597 0.122226691241 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0328358208955 0.0403226058552 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78561996646 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0208955223881 0.0326793684256 64% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0955223880597 0.0861772015684 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0328358208955 0.021408717616 153% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0089552238806 0.011925033212 75% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1881.0 1933.35771543 97% => OK
No of words: 296.0 316.048096192 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.35472972973 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.435810810811 0.374742101984 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.287162162162 0.28420135186 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.206081081081 0.203846283523 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141891891892 0.137316102897 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78561996646 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.037074148 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52027027027 0.56093040696 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.3495850233 60.7387585426 86% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.4444444444 20.7743622355 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3099726896 49.517814964 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 127.492653851 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 20.7743622355 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.814263465372 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 45.1606606607 49.1944974215 92% => OK
Elegance: 2.18965517241 1.69124875643 129% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22068493681 0.332605444948 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104312754353 0.102741220458 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0779980125106 0.0668466124924 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.515955864745 0.534860350844 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.114025404283 0.148594505496 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823254461036 0.134430193775 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458754085671 0.0742795772207 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.253900709775 0.324371583561 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0540653828069 0.0638462369009 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136709047378 0.228012699653 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037307544696 0.058150111329 64% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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