Nowadays,there is a rapid increase of rubbish amounts all around the world.what are the main cause for it? What can be solution,in your opinion ?
Nowadays, the rubbish volume is rapidly raised around the world because every year we dump a massive billions tons of waste which are no respectable methods for release garbage items to the environment, as a result of that, ecological problems are growing day by day.
First of all, in my perspective, I would like to say one of the main reasons for accelerated unwanted things, as a result of production environment. For an example, number of companies are increasing rapidly in the world, therefore they release rubbish to the environment and also gradually increase their production count to a...
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for release garbage items
for releasing garbage items
to release garbage items
For an illustration, Can use polyethylene product to reprocessing as a result of that , they use again and again.
For an illustration, we Can use polyethylene product to reprocess as a result of that, they are used again and again.
flaws:
1. keep simplicity:
remove those:
in my perspective, I would like to say
in my view, I would like to say
2. More compound or complex sentences/clauses wanted. Try not to use pronouns like 'we...' as the subject of a sentence.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 281 350
No. of Characters: 1398 1500
No. of Different Words: 149 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.094 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.975 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.874 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 104 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 82 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.417 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.052 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.386 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.638 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.197 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 206, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...s usage among the people. Formerly, the most of people use polyethylene products in their life...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 93, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... to find any systems for managing waste in a proper way. Garbage, recycling is one of the bette...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 365, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...fic rubbish we can use to make compost. Hence we can reduce garbage collection in the...
^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'first', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'such as', 'as a result', 'first of all', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24126984127 0.247107183377 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.133333333333 0.155533422707 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0984126984127 0.0946595960268 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0412698412698 0.0501214627716 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.047619047619 0.0437548338989 109% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130158730159 0.122226691241 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0412698412698 0.0403226058552 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.95564831163 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0380952380952 0.0326793684256 117% => OK
Particles: 0.0031746031746 0.00163938923432 194% => OK
Determiners: 0.111111111111 0.0861772015684 129% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0222222222222 0.021408717616 104% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00634920634921 0.011925033212 53% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1724.0 1933.35771543 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 316.048096192 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.13523131673 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.395017793594 0.374742101984 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.298932384342 0.28420135186 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.20640569395 0.203846283523 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.149466192171 0.137316102897 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95564831163 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55871886121 0.56093040696 100% => OK
Word variations: 57.3865900512 60.7387585426 94% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 23.4166666667 20.7743622355 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.9215146641 49.517814964 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.666666667 127.492653851 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7743622355 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.16666666667 0.814263465372 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 53.3099051008 49.1944974215 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.85714285714 1.69124875643 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332276101208 0.332605444948 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.136656122201 0.102741220458 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.069221705365 0.0668466124924 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.614694026367 0.534860350844 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.216557335887 0.148594505496 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147610650883 0.134430193775 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06470171913 0.0742795772207 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.341890644216 0.324371583561 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0568203704481 0.0638462369009 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221106927274 0.228012699653 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034647586011 0.058150111329 60% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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