You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Dear Anna,
It's nice to get your letter for asking my advice about getting a job or going to colleage.
For my opinion, I would suggest you get a job first, and you will learn variety of experience from your work in the society. If you feel your abilities of work is inqueak, you could study specific classes, joining clubs, training classes from the government centers or the community institutes after working. In the school professiors can teach you some classes in theories of specific fields, but these 4-years education experience is ultimately for directing you how to get your job, so It would be better choice if you can learn it from reality society than the school.
I know your interests is in coding webpages and also you had an experience as an volunteer for maintaining their servers in local community, I would recommend you persuade the job that is releated Science Engineer, there are many opportunties in downtown of Victoria.
Whatever you choose your type of life, If you need me to check your resume or CV, please feel free to contact with me through email.
I hope you have a great summer!
Sincerely,
Sandy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...out getting a job or going to colleage. For my opinion, I would suggest you get ...
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Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...pages and also you had an experience as an volunteer for maintaining their servers...
^^
Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e job that is releated Science Engineer, there are many opportunties in downtown ...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230414746544 0.220444632235 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.179723502304 0.167888034529 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0460829493088 0.0606518309736 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0184331797235 0.0506257000042 36% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.142857142857 0.118615021944 120% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129032258065 0.107062808482 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0460829493088 0.041066498444 112% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.56737399091 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0230414746544 0.0385302599488 60% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0599078341014 0.0714148451538 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0322580645161 0.0191574576366 168% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0138248847926 0.00930345855455 149% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1148.0 1141.60824742 101% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.134020619 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82741116751 5.53046319177 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78085437643 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.329949238579 0.284621296913 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.263959390863 0.211203875043 125% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.177664974619 0.133321485273 133% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106598984772 0.0843313296314 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56737399091 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639593908629 0.622163163488 103% => OK
Word variations: 65.0602706046 62.8969750728 103% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 12.9587628866 62% => OK
Sentence length: 24.625 16.4300151701 150% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.0252094573 44.7399317507 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.5 90.9928171075 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 16.4300151701 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.613754768223 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.09278350515 143% => OK
Readability: 51.0209390863 37.5504026743 136% => OK
Elegance: 1.18918918919 1.13073093955 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317458784838 0.331212695627 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.129603438408 0.0927372745006 140% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0857432597742 0.0736520305886 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.871418348314 0.579516596996 150% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.158351002645 0.180689518051 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153172737222 0.122183219658 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112725522549 0.0765303033291 147% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.150576812302 0.211926503985 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0897366926647 0.0737400523855 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198771648781 0.203819188451 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126651924222 0.067151250289 189% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.45360824742 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.0206185567 25% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.56701030928 39% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 8.32989690722 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.