Many young people today have their own mobile phone and believe it is essential to their lives. Other people dislike mobile phones and think that they are both a nuisance and an unnecessary luxury item. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these two points of view?
Generally speaking, it is widely accepted that the advent of mobile phone has considerably had the most significant effect on everyday communication in life. The existence of this kind of technology has made convenience to connect with others or even to see them through the Internet. There are two opposing effects of using mobile phones which will be taken into account in this essay.
First of all, it must be considered that what kind of assistance mobile phone has brought. Nowadays, time is playing a crucial role in society. Humanity, mentally, has a tendency to socialized and be in a communication with others. Mobile phone has extremely had an effective influence in this terms; not only has this device made connection between people easy, but also it is a user-friendly device which all kinds of people, young and old, can use it.
On the other hand, there are some people who argue that a device like this can be an annoying and a troublemaker tool with which people always are in trouble concentrating on their jobs or duties and also their privacy has been harmed. It is highly likely that using a mobile phone in public, especially in crowded places, annoys others; by talking on the phone or by mobile ringtone. Furthermore, the people who are required to focus on their duties, such as doctors, or passengers crossing the street, can easily be distracted by this device which can lead into irrecoverable consequences, such as death.
All in all, by considering the pros and cons of presence of mobile phones in society, I strongly believe that people can profit from the pros by eliminating the harmful aspects of using it; by making it silent, not using it constantly and using it in emergencies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, kind of, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8537414966 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73932874569 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544217687075 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5386635519 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.727272727 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7272727273 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239635408314 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920726709651 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534331173628 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146740759611 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414202971888 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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