A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give a contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care your pet describe other household duties.
Dear Brendan,
I’m sorry I haven’t written for so long. I’m writing to thank you for your help to look after my pet and house when I’m out of the city.
If you remember, I have a cat and a dog. My cat, Garfield, is very fat and lazy because of this you should be extremely careful when you feed him. There is a cabin on the right side of the kitchen; there you can find a bowl with his name. Please pay attention to the mark on the bowl it is his helping for the whole day. Besides, near the fridge there a small cabin where I keep dog’s feed. Please feed him twice a day don’t forget about water and change it every day. By the way, my dog calls Martin, he’s old and friendly. Take a ride at least once by week. Lucky you, I don’t have any plants, and you don’t need to water them. In case of emergency, veterinary number is near the computer.
I would like you to pick up my post every Friday and put it on my desk. Living the house, please open the windows on the second floor. If any problem arises don’t hesitate to call me. My cell phone is +9999999. I’ll be back in around two weeks. You are always welcome to use the fridge, foods, TV and other facilities I have at my home.
With love and many thanks from me,
Rafael.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 35, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. With love and many thanks from me, Rafael.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, second, so, at least, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32786885246 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24905546181 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627049180328 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.6581239673 44.8134815571 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.5789473684 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8421052632 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.68421052632 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133433030303 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372392616123 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628824651661 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802044228769 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713962961458 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.95 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.98 7.59969072165 79% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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