what discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country ?
The question is that what discovery has been most beneficial for people in your country in the last 100 years. Everyone in consideration to his private view can opt a specific invention in this period; however I believe that the most worthwhile stuff has been computer and internet related with it. My arguments and reasons are listed below which will strengthen my vantage point:
To begin with, nowadays it is axiomatic that the computer plays a crucial role in people's life. Every society needs to it for broadening base of its knowledge. In fact the computer and internet have optimized educational system, medical community and politic and economic beds and list goes on. For instance the students exploit internet for access to a spread spectrum of resources for their research papers, teachers improve their performance through obtaining the newest methods in the teaching or doctors use it as a data base for saving their patience's information. It goes without saying that computers have increased the speed of people's function.
The second reason why I advocate this appealing invention lies in the fact that for creating creative ideas or developing a country, it is essential to people share their experiences with each other even in the longest distances. The internet has provided an opportunity for them to communicate with different men and diverse backgrounds, Consequently the internet not only helps them to boost their interpersonal skills through making new friends, but also it causes countries to expend the level of their literacy. Nobody could overlook this fact that in such a modern world, all societies try to compete with each other for having a sophisticated space.
Having discussed this issue from this perspective, I am going to empower it by following my opinion. Since today’s the circumstance of life has made people forced to work for a long time; hence there is a little time for amusement and entertainment, however this invention has solved this problem either. People are able to play game, read book, and download the up-dated music or movies and a lot of other things. The computer and its internet have returned the people’s goes energy due to the pressure of life.
By taking all above arguments mentioned, this conclusion could be drawn that the invention of computer has given a chance to our generation to obtain the most useful information, save time and organize its life. Although the computer may has created some problems, however its advantages outweighs to disadvantages it brings to us.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 25 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 417 350
No. of Characters: 2091 1500
No. of Different Words: 245 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.519 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.014 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.707 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 156 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 121 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 91 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 51 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.529 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.433 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.471 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.297 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.362 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.054 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, look, may, second, so, then, while, for instance, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2143.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13908872902 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79642014194 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58273381295 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1711500108 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.9375 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0625 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235213373445 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894827618601 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.182752391061 0.0737576698707 248% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135562832661 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129514633167 0.0645574589148 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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