Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize .
An ability to organize life is a very complex issue because it depends on various subjects. Some people think the modern life is more complex than the past, and young people need to learn some vital abilities to manage their lives. In my opinion, it is true because in nowadays people’s knowledge and abilities are advanced. So, young people need to have a vital ability to manage their life.
The first reason is that is about the effects of the modern life on finding jobs. Todays, finding job is more difficult than before because the new equipment such as a tv, the internet, and the others provide a situation that learning a skill become easy for every person around the world. So, now people must find a vital and different ability to gain an appropriate job. For example, in the past, just a few numbers of people knew how to work with a computer since it was easy for them to find their favorite job, but now almost all of the people know a lot of things about a computer. This condition provides a competition among young people that notice them if they want to find their favorite job, they should have another skill that is scarce in a society.
The second reason is that the truth becomes an invaluable thing. In the past, people respect a morality since people’ relationship at the work or in their life was insecure, but these days, it is really difficult to find a trustworthy person because of that most of the young people have a problem find a partner either in job or life. This situation is annoying for them and it teaches them they must be aware of everything that happens around them. Therefore, the lack of trustworthy make people’s life; especially young people, hard and they know without having some essential skills that help them to know people well are necessary.
In conclusion, it is true that young people need a vital ability to manage and organize their lives. They need to these abilities to can find their favorite job or find an appropriate partner for their life.
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- It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject. 65
- It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job. 71
- young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping to their communities 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...ives. In my opinion, it is true because in nowadays people's knowledge and abilities a...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 531, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...find their favorite job, but now almost all of the people know a lot of things about a com...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68067226891 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46063086111 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445378151261 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5497630648 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.4 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390594482956 0.236089414692 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149159294253 0.076458572812 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935215296122 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265091572346 0.150856017488 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11149880518 0.0645574589148 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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