Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well.
Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well.
It is one of the controversial issues among people because it has an important effect on people's destiny. I completely agree with this claim that thriving people examine new and risky activities instead of just doing an ordinary one that they know them well.
First, doing these activities can help them to gain beneficial information. Maybe some people think that this choice; doing risky things, brings them a lot of problems. It is true, but these difficulties might be like a teacher for them because it shows them how to overcome the problems by becoming aware of their abilities and endurances. Actually, it makes them a strong and an informative person. Surely, they suffer hardness, but they gain the useful information that is generated from experiences that they obtain.
Second, they can achieve their goal by utilizing them. We have heard a lot of stories from a famous people such as Bill gate, Steven Jobs, and the others how to try very risky and dangerous things until they received to their purpose. All of them do not afraid from a result because they just concentrate on receiving their target. They know if they defeat in their activities, they do not miss anything. In fact, it is the first step of achievements. This idea helps them to become a successful person in their lives.
Third, it assists them to find their favorite job. The majority of the people after education try to find a job, and absolutely they do that job for the first time. Also, maybe that job being one of the haphazard jobs, but they know they must accept that. As I said before, they earn practical experiences. These experiences make them an expert person. Hence, the one advantage of adventure things is finding their suitable job that makes them a prosperous person.
Finally, some people think a conclusion of doing actions can be irrecoverable. They believe that it is better for the human doing things that they have sufficient knowledge about that because it is safe. However, I assert that the successful people are informative and skillful because they have done activities that bring them a lot of profits.
In conclusion, although some people acclaim that the disadvantages of this choice overweight its advantages, it directs them to their achievements by making them an inflexible person in front of problems.
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- TPO-5 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do. 73
- Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. 70
- The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 66
- In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, second, so, third, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 79.0 43.0788530466 183% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91484184915 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63384214687 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493917274939 0.524837075471 94% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6372157364 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1666666667 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379759850686 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122032362361 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.19461616246 0.0737576698707 264% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272606519095 0.150856017488 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.303586927649 0.0645574589148 470% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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