younger people unlike elders, they enjoy life more
agree or disagree
If we ever had to ask ourselves what is the real meaning of joy and how to achieve a happy fulfilled life? Is it a matter of age, money earning, or travelling? For me, joy can be achieved by the accomplishements in life, the success in a career, in a personal life or even in travelling. Points that I will explore in the essay.
To begin with, if one’s determines on a goal and trying very hard to gain the good results for his hard work, the moment that it accomplished no matter what has been done, the efforts, staying awake for many nights, the sweat has been shede. all would be a good memories despite of how hard it was to get to the peak. It is worth it!
Secondly, being successful in a your job and getting the appraisal and the credits from your bosses for the good job that would benefited bothe the company and you will be a source of joy. Talking from a personal experience, when I wasan intern in my work my bosses noticed my deduction and inthosiasm and that what made them given me as promotion for a higher position even that I was still in my internship period. however if I look back to what I have discussed, it seems that it is all about discovering thinngs and testing success at the end that what makes me enjoy in my life. traveling was not in my schedule as I was connecting success to hard work.
so, when I take alook at the older people I see that they know how to enjoy their life to the fullest. my grandparents are agood example to mention here, everytime we went to visited them I feel their joy and happiness just to se their grandchildren. they maintained their health by doing spotrs. traveled every year to different countries and places to enjoy and discover new things despite their age. i think to my self, they work hard in life and establish a stable lifestyle and now they really know and appreciate every moment and enjoy it to the extreme. that makes me put comapre that people in a younger age are discovering more than enjoying life, as they work hard and enjoying games for example, or watching a concert, and consider it a real joy of life at atime. on the other side older people appreciate the meaning of joy and live it to the exteme.
to be concluded, age is never be an obstacle to live a happy joyfull life, but the way of living the comfortable, happy life is the issue. that is way elders appreciate joy and live it all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, still, as to, for example, i feel, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1950.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35267857143 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51346818588 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486607142857 0.524837075471 93% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9463562672 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.631578947 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5789473684 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178632983081 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595202599309 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782141194248 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876049364773 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950620822555 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.25 10.9000537634 76% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.