younger people unlike elders, they enjoy life moreagree or disagree

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: All
... many nights, the sweat has been shede. all would be a good memories despite of how...
^^^
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'memory'?
Suggestion: memory
...eat has been shede. all would be a good memories despite of how hard it was to get to th...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'your'?
Suggestion: a; your
...th it! Secondly, being successful in a your job and getting the appraisal and the c...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 418, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...at I was still in my internship period. however if I look back to what I have discussed...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 418, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: however,
...at I was still in my internship period. however if I look back to what I have discussed...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 585, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Traveling
...nd that what makes me enjoy in my life. traveling was not in my schedule as I was connect...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...was connecting success to hard work. so, when I take alook at the older people ...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “so , when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...was connecting success to hard work. so, when I take alook at the older people I see ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...how to enjoy their life to the fullest. my grandparents are agood example to menti...
^^
Line 7, column 252, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ppiness just to se their grandchildren. they maintained their health by doing spotrs...
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Line 7, column 298, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Traveled
...aintained their health by doing spotrs. traveled every year to different countries and p...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 404, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
... discover new things despite their age. i think to my self, they work hard in lif...
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Line 7, column 404, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... discover new things despite their age. i think to my self, they work hard in lif...
^
Line 7, column 562, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...ery moment and enjoy it to the extreme. that makes me put comapre that people in a y...
^^^^
Line 7, column 776, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...onsider it a real joy of life at atime. on the other side older people appreciate ...
^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...ng of joy and live it to the exteme. to be concluded, age is never be an obstac...
^^
Line 9, column 31, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...xteme. to be concluded, age is never be an obstacle to live a happy joyfull lif...
^^
Line 9, column 140, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...e comfortable, happy life is the issue. that is way elders appreciate joy and live i...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, still, as to, for example, i feel, i think, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1950.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35267857143 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51346818588 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486607142857 0.524837075471 93% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9463562672 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.631578947 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5789473684 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178632983081 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595202599309 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782141194248 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876049364773 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950620822555 0.0645574589148 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.25 10.9000537634 76% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.