Some people think it is more important for government to spend public money on promoting healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of the people who are already ill. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?
Few people have the viewpoint that government should invest in enlightening and encouraging people to exhibit a healthy lifestyle rather than spending it on those who are sick. In my opinion, I strongly believe that the focus of the government should be more on promoting a good and healthy lifestyle instead of investing in treatments.
Firstly, healthier people are happier than those who are sick. As a result, they are more productive and also have a longer life span. Therefore, the primary focus of the government should be to make the public aware of its benefit. If people would fall less sick, consequently, there would be a lesser requirement for investing in treatments. Public awareness would also result in resolving a lot of diseases from the roots.
In addition, there are countries with population in hundred of crores. Consequently, health services of governments may not be able to ensure proper treatment for such large population. Therefore, promoting awareness would be a wise decision. In rural areas, people often fall sick to diseases as they are unaware of methods to prevent them. Public enlightenment thus becomes an important practice for health services. Countries like India have become Polio free just by promoting it on a mass level. They utilized all the mainstream media to eradicate the disease, polio, from the country.
On the contrary, government health services should also make sure that adequate treatment is provided to all the diseased people in both public and private hospitals. They should also invest in exploring antidotes and vaccinations for eliminating the diseases.
To conclude, I would strongly recommend that the awareness programs should be the priority of the government, as prevention is always better than the cure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
... there are countries with population in hundred of crores. Consequently, health service...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, so, therefore, thus, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29225352113 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87485067706 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531690140845 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0726398148 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4117647059 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2268686934 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703361042584 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061753592 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128599168575 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068797728712 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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