2 weeks ago you bought a radio from a local branch of a well-known chain of shops. It did not work properly. The shop took it back and said they would repair it. You have waited a week and still it is not ready.
Dear sir or madam
I writing to you to enquire about your decision of situation , was has happened with me half month ago.I bought device in the one of yours stores , however this radio did not work normally.It was returned to shop and i have promise about repair. But after a week device it not ready.
I wish to now what has happened with radio , and why repair works still so long time until now.When I have buy some goods in your chain of shops , i wait for perfect service. I hope, this situations should be decided after my complaining, because i have real needing of this device on my job.I would inform you about your promises, and ask about possibility sooner repair works, whether receive another new radio.
Since I have not receive answer from you before, probably you can send report very soon, as possible.
Best wishes
Jane
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...owever this radio did not work normally.It was returned to shop and i have promise...
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..., whether receive another new radio. Since I have not receive answer from you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 701.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67333333333 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26429791169 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.726666666667 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.1273749887 44.8134815571 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 116.833333333 76.5299724578 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 2.54639175258 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276586720142 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120970653465 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600484509599 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136498397704 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845790019294 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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