Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Neighbours play an important role in our lives, and almost everyone in the world has at least one neighbor. For this reason, it is important to consider what characteristics define a good neighbor. In my opinion, a good neighbor is both supportive and respectful. I will explore the reasons why I feel this way in the following essay.
To begin with, a good neighbor must be supportive because our lives are full of unplanned emergencies. Oftentimes the people live close to us are the only ones who can provide assistance when things go wrong. For example, my family experienced a major house fire several years ago. It was a traumatic experience as it happened in the middle of the night and we lost most of our belongings. Though none of us suffered any injuries, we did experience a lot of emotional trauma. Our situation was aided, however, by a compassionate neighbor who immediately called the fire department upon noticing the fire and who also provided us with clean clothes, food and a place to stay for the night. This example demonstrates how important it is to have kind and supportive neighbors when an emergency happens.
Moreover, a good neighbor is someone who is respectful of those around him. People view their home as a sort of sanctuary from the stressful modern world and if their neighbors do not respect this belief they will suffer a lot. My own experience demonstrates this reality. Five years ago, I lived alone in an apartment in a busy city. My job at that time was extremely stressful and also physically draining. After a day at work I wanted nothing more than to go home and unwind. However, the person living in the apartment above me played loud music all night which made it almost impossible for me to relax. He had no respect for those around him and thought only of himself. In contrast, the person who lives above my family today does not do this and though I have the same job, I am better able to deal with its difficulties. This illustrates the value of having a neighbor who respects those who live nearby.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that good neighbors are both supportive and respectful. This is because such people can help us handle life’s unexpected emergencies and allow us to feel comfortable in our own homes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, at least, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, sort of, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75314861461 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79416511982 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549118387909 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.039293497 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0434782609 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2608695652 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.60869565217 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241187356312 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072415718648 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065831636177 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156463659808 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194638668191 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.