Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities?
Upon the question why some people are attracted to dangerous sport activities, different people have different opinions based on their cultures. From my point of view, there are various reasons for this kinds of activities but in the following paragraphs, I will try to explain three of them.
First of all, most people participate in some sport activities such as mountain climbing because they find it a good way to get rid of stress. These days, people have to work from early in the morning to late at the night. They usually have to perform ordinary and difficult tasks which are boring and stressful. So that, climbing a mountain or riding a horse are good ways to relax and obtain pleasure. People can benefit from fresh and clean air when they reach to top of the mountain.
In the second place, most people want to try new things and take risks. In my opinion, if they participate in dangerous sports, they will get valuable experiences and learn useful lessons. For example, when they climb a mountain, they will learn how to cope with difficulties in order to become successful. By participating in car racing, they can learn how to control their feelings and how to use their abilities to become winner.
Finally, it is important to bear in mind that, participating in dangerous sports and becoming winner in championships will increase self-confidence and it has positive effects on mind. Furthermore, it has also great influences on our physical health. For example, mountain climbing will increase lung capacity. In addition, some people want to show their abilities and their courage to friends by participating in dangerous sports like bull fighting.
Taking all the aforementioned arguments into account, it can be concluded that there are different reasons to be attracted to dangerous sport activities which I outlined above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, so, for example, in addition, such as, first of all, in my opinion, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0522875817 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81329845772 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8630344135 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.625 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 5.45110844103 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23436941037 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734601327478 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900824130844 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149198535852 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745586767341 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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