Do you agree or disagree that progress is always good?
Upon the question is progress always good, different people have different opinions based on their education, emotion, culture, etc. From my point of view, progress can bring countless problems. For example, although people can benefit from various types of technology such as computer, automobile and cellular phone, these new technologies cause many problems in our world. In the following paragraphs, I will try to explain my position more clearly.
First of all, these days, most big cities suffer from air pollution and greenhouse effect. Undoubtedly, automobiles and factories are the main sources of producing harmful gasses like carbon dioxide and methane. While the importance of automobile in transportation is undeniable, I think its disadvantages outweigh its benefits. Besides, automobiles cause numerous highway accidents and injuries all over the world.
In the second place, according to the latest researches which were published in well-known journals, cell phone has some detrimental effects on our health. Recent experiments have shown that people who use cell phones more than three hours a day, are more prone to cancer and brain tumors. Other types of technology like the Internet and television have had negative influences on our lives. These days, most teenagers and youth spend several hours a day watching television, surfing the web and so forth. In my opinion, they should use this amount of time for useful activities like exercising.
Finally, it is important to bear in mind that no one can deny the advantages of progress. For example, people can easily communicate with their friends through Skype, Instagram. In addition, they can travel to other continents in a few hours.
Taking all the aforementioned arguments into account, it can be concluded that progress is not always good because it has caused many problems in our world which I outlined above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, if, second, so, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, such as, first of all, in my opinion, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36577181208 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81541224362 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657718120805 0.524837075471 125% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0176426122 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0588235294 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0846111808522 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0257538732034 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509977604563 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568281336045 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588143661747 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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