Some people choose to have their first child at an older age. What are the reasons? Do advantages outweight disadvantages?
There is a modern tendency that people prefer having children later in life. The underlying reasons for this trend are varied, and, from my standpoint, the merits would eclipse the downsides.
There are two main explanations for the decision of procrastinating childbirth. The first one is that modern people having values the role of their work and freedom over that of stabilizing their family. It is clear that having children at an early age would result in a lot of obstacles to their job performance and life quality. For example, instead of relaxing after a stress working day, young parents have to spend their treasure time on looking after the children. Further reason including the benefit of strengthening their financial resources before giving birth. Children, therefore, would live in a more sufficient environment.
On the other hand, its drawbacks should not be overlooked. First, childbirth in an older age might influence on their future children’s health. The scientists pointed out that more than one percent of those children suffer from not only mental diseases but also unusual body development. As a matter of fact, if this trend obtains more popularity among the young generation, it will act as a catalyst for population aging in the near future. In other words, it would lead to a significant damage economic structure due to the imbalance in the workforce.
In conclusion, the two principal reasons for this phenomenon can be seen as the importance of modern work and family finance. In my opinion, although its disadvantages are severe, I am convinced that the advantages are of more significance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ance of modern work and family finance. In my opinion, although its disadvantages ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18113207547 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94090363738 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0087287982 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.5333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73333333333 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216148470566 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659919892984 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071137745896 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11533544791 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510840879283 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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