TPO 42.Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
"Workers are inevitable part of every society" said Bernard Russell, one of the brilliant mind through the history. There is no doubt that divided tasks between employees is one of the controversial issues in every modern society, affecting people in all walks of life considerably. The question, however, is that whether to agree or disagree has sparked spirited debate among people. I am, to a huge extent, agree with this standpoint. In the ensuing paragraphs, I will try to shed some lights on my perspective through ample examples and conspicuous reasons.
The exquisite point to be mentioned here is that it was crystal clear that most of the workers really tired about doing the same work all the time, sometimes we can see that it can cause some mental disease between workers like depression, due to all of them need challenge during the time of their work in order to enhance their enjoyment to do their work more efficiently additionally make their life more colorful instead of making it blue. As an illustration I can point out to an experiment that occur in 2 different companies for showing the satisfaction of employees, finally scientists realize that people who have various types of activity in his career are happier than others do routine works every day.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that the most crucial aim for people who work is that to gain diverse experiences, this is not only develop their knowledge, but also help them to be more resilient when they get in to the trouble. For instance, we can see that lots of people who are master in different kind of tasks, have more self-confidence also make an effort to find the best solution to overcome issues which may be block their way, thus it helps them to increase their value among others moreover achieve to the best position in their job.
Although the aforementioned reasons are the first reason which cross the mind at the first glance, they are no mean that the only ones which available. Actually there is another subtle point which must be born in our mind. It should be noted that nobody can deny that when we struggle for new duties and try to solve them, we enhance our creativity, in addition attempt to express novel idea to inspire our boss and other workers, hence by this advance, we can gain to the upper level which make our life and future more brighter thanks to we earn more money to make appropriate life for ourselves.
To make a long story short, from all the above mentioned points and reasons, one we can safety draw a conclusion that if one weight merits and demerits of the above statements, we can realize that although it is good from far that accomplishing same obligation is profitable but when you look carefully you recognize that it is far from good.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 517, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'brighter' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: brighter
...er level which make our life and future more brighter thanks to we earn more money to make ap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, thus, for instance, in addition, kind of, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 29.0 11.0286738351 263% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2316.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 486.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76543209877 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60355966355 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541152263374 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 723.6 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.1344086022 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.483872843 48.9658058833 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.153846154 100.406767564 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.3846153846 20.6045352989 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 5.45110844103 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147974715866 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443386375867 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387806468379 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724705004447 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369558753501 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 11.7677419355 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 58.1214874552 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.1575268817 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.0537634409 167% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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