having a car
Having a car has become an essential part of many people's lives. It offers flexibility
to their life and work, and also provides ready access to a variety of services and leisure
options. However, a range of problems have been identified and need to be addressed.
The problems associated with frequent car use are becoming increasingly familiar to
the general public. The widespread use of cars has real environmental costs. Vehicles
are major sources of urban air pollution and greenhouse gas emissions. It is reported
that road traffic is the source of one third of all harmful air pollution in the world. Car
exhaust contributes to add rain, carbon dioxide and lead, which cause global warming
and damage human health. Traffic jam is another problem. As more and more people
drive to work rather than walk, cycle or take public transport, there are heavy traffic
jams almost every day at rush hours. The most serious problem, however, is safety. Car
accidents cause huge numbers of casualties every year.
To solve these problems, some people suggest that the government should impose a
strict restriction on the use of cars, but I do not think this is the best option, because this
would lead to reduced mobility for people and a decline in the car industry. I think a
better solution would be for car manufacturers to design more environmentally friendly
cars, which run on solar power or hydrogen. Also, traffic problems can be alleviated by
building more underground tunnels and parking garages, and safety problems can be
avoided by educating drivers as well as pedestrians to use greater caution on the road.
So, in conclusion, I think that while discouraging the car use might seem a quick
solution to many problems currently facing the society, it is most unlikely to be a permanent
cure.
- Some people believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- Every year several languages die out. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 73
- Manager 78
- Some people believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 73
- Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social andcommercial perspectives.What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reducethese pressures? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 5, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... becoming increasingly familiar to the general public. The widespread use of cars has real en...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, third, well, while, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08250825083 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70545749678 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630363036304 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4552365039 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.25 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248948201422 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825521937464 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942309567039 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653986849676 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847969553427 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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