Topic 7: Many people believe that children should be educated by nature while others think it wastes their time and they should only study in their school? Which is your opinion ?
their time and they should only study in their school? Which is your opinion ?
Nowadays, creating opportunities for children to learn within nature is the heated controversial issue. Many people argue that this is extraordinary part of life for children while others think children only shoud concentrate on studying in their school. Personally, I strongly agree with first opinion.
On the one hand, training kids in mother nature is the way to improve their awareness of safeguarding the environment from damage. In fact, if children is allowed to contact with nature place, they will understand deeply about the flora and fauna. This not only help children appreciate the great impact of natural world to human life but also subconsciously formed the love and the guard for it. As a result, the society will develop generation but also protecting the environment before human encroachment, this is only possible with such methods.
On the other hand, forcing children to study so much rather than running wild in the woods and fields is counter-productive. According to many researches in several nations, children’s brain are more creative, fantastic and observable when they exposure to the natural space. Moreover, when parents encourage their children to play outdoor and explore the wildlife, the proportions of kids regularly playing indoor will decrease rapidly. Consequently, many diseases in kids such as obesity, deficit disorder,… will be controlled than ever before.
In conclusion, nature are appropriately important to educate children, not only which provides ecological intelligence but also developes their health and consciousness of defending natural world from harm.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55769230769 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03569192984 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619230769231 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2269295591 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.214285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415848468705 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141392608876 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137792427963 0.0667982634062 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273031049409 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.180660335459 0.056905535591 317% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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