Topic: It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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Taking a gap year before attending college...
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Taking a gap year before attending college has recently gained enormous...
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...a gap year before attending college has recently gained enormous populari...
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...p year before attending college has recently gained enormous popularity am...
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...efore attending college has recently gained enormous popularity amongst high...
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...ttending college has recently gained enormous popularity amongst high school ...
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...ts and the drawbacks of the phenomenon. Having a year off after high schoo...
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...drawbacks of the phenomenon. Having a year off after high school gradu...
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...wbacks of the phenomenon. Having a year off after high school graduati...
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... of the phenomenon. Having a year off after high school graduation is...
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...he phenomenon. Having a year off after high school graduation is adv...
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...omenon. Having a year off after high school graduation is advantageo...
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.... Having a year off after high school graduation is advantageous in...
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...aving a year off after high school graduation is advantageous in some c...
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...ar off after high school graduation is advantageous in some certain aspe...
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...off after high school graduation is advantageous in some certain aspects....
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...gh school graduation is advantageous in some certain aspects. First, stud...
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...school graduation is advantageous in some certain aspects. First, students...
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...tion is advantageous in some certain aspects. First, students can utilize...
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...eous in some certain aspects. First, students can utilize this period of...
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...some certain aspects. First, students can utilize this period of time to...
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...certain aspects. First, students can utilize this period of time to tra...
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...aspects. First, students can utilize this period of time to travel to a...
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...s. First, students can utilize this period of time to travel to acquire...
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...t, students can utilize this period of time to travel to acquire knowled...
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...ts can utilize this period of time to travel to acquire knowledge of vari...
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...lize this period of time to travel to acquire knowledge of various fields s...
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... as foreign languages and cultures. This would be more difficult during thei...
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...eign languages and cultures. This would be more difficult during their year...
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... languages and cultures. This would be more difficult during their years a...
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...ages and cultures. This would be more difficult during their years at uni...
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...ltures. This would be more difficult during their years at university ow...
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...ould be more difficult during their years at university owing to their ...
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...e more difficult during their years at university owing to their intense...
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...ore difficult during their years at university owing to their intense stu...
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...lt during their years at university owing to their intense studying schedu...
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...ing their years at university owing to their intense studying schedules. Se...
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... their years at university owing to their intense studying schedules. Second...
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...raduates benefit from taking a temporary job before starting their college l...
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...tes benefit from taking a temporary job before starting their college life. ...
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...fit from taking a temporary job before starting their college life. Due to ...
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...aking a temporary job before starting their college life. Due to the inade...
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...y job before starting their college life. Due to the inadequate provision ...
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... starting their college life. Due to the inadequate provision of career orien...
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... college are varied. Initially, compared to the students having a year off, th...
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...tially, compared to the students having a year off, those who go straight to u...
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...lly, compared to the students having a year off, those who go straight to univ...
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...ed to the students having a year off, those who go straight to university afte...
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... are more likely to have a permanent job early. They finish their academic s...
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...ly to have a permanent job early. They finish their academic studies one y...
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...ve a permanent job early. They finish their academic studies one year in ...
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...rmanent job early. They finish their academic studies one year in advanc...
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...b early. They finish their academic studies one year in advance, hence ...
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... They finish their academic studies one year in advance, hence better op...
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...y finish their academic studies one year in advance, hence better opportu...
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...ish their academic studies one year in advance, hence better opportunities...
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... their academic studies one year in advance, hence better opportunities to ...
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...ademic studies one year in advance, hence better opportunities to get a job ...
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...s as well as discipline. In other words, one year spent on travelling or wo...
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...well as discipline. In other words, one year spent on travelling or working...
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...s discipline. In other words, one year spent on travelling or working can ...
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...pline. In other words, one year spent on travelling or working can demoti...
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...e. In other words, one year spent on travelling or working can demotivate...
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...words, one year spent on travelling or working can demotivate them from...
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...travelling or working can demotivate them from following tertiary education....
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...ling or working can demotivate them from following tertiary education. ...
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...hem from following tertiary education. In conclusion, despite some benefits in ...
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...terms of traveling and working, taking a year off before college life might ...
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...of traveling and working, taking a year off before college life might both ...
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...aveling and working, taking a year off before college life might both jeop...
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...and working, taking a year off before college life might both jeopardize ...
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... year off before college life might both jeopardize students' occupa...
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... off before college life might both jeopardize students' occupational...
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... and result in studying discouragement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, look, second, so, well, as for, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41796875 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90286418618 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2917973626 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.692307692 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 90.0 5.01903807615 1793% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200936058502 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753523492159 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662193258496 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113738872749 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479065915454 0.056905535591 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.