The chart shows below the result of a survey the adult education. The first chart shows the reason why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the cost of adult education should be shared.
The chart shows some reasons why adult decide to study. To crave certain knowledge in educational institution is among other several reasons that adult mostly want to gain from university, it is showed in the chart by “interest in subject 40%”. To gain qualification in certain field of subject, the percentage of 38 took second place why adult decide to study.
People or adult specifically aware of the importance of their current job, so to support their current job/helpful for current job (22%), they decide to study to a higher level to gain knowledge for well-paid profession. To improve prospects of promotion and enjoy learning/ studying reached the same percentage of 20% while to be able to change jobs reached the percentage of 12 in why adult decide to further their education. By studying, adult are supposed to meet different people with different background thus it helps them able to communicate well and build a good relationship with others.
The pie chart shows how the cost of education should be shared. From the total of 100% of the cost, 40% of the cost should be paid individually, 35% should be paid from employer and the remain cost of the course 25% should be paid by taxpayer.
- Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteeth century. The map below shows the development of the village.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village. 60
- The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 80
- News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would be better if more good news was reported? 74
- Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think it is fully justified while others think it is unfair.Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 70
- The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion mil to be have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. 67
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Sentence: The chart shows some reasons why adult decide to study.
Description: The fragment adult decide to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace decide with verb, past tense
Sentence: To crave certain knowledge in educational institution is among other several reasons that adult mostly want to gain from university, it is showed in the chart by interest in subject 40.
Description: The word showed is not usually used as a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to showed
Sentence: To gain qualification in certain field of subject, the percentage of 38 took second place why adult decide to study.
Description: The fragment adult decide to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace decide with verb, past tense
Sentence: To improve prospects of promotion and enjoy learning/ studying reached the same percentage of 20 while to be able to change jobs reached the percentage of 12 in why adult decide to further their education.
Description: The fragment adult decide to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace decide with verb, past tense
Description: The word further is not usually used as a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to further
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4
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para 3: body 2
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Category: Good Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 207 200
No. of Characters: 970 1000
No. of Different Words: 112 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.793 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.686 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.622 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 46 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 9.98 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.441 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.681 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.172 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4