You recently applied for 2 separate jobs. Both have chosen to hire you, but you must write a letter to 1 of them explaining why you are unable to take the position. Include in your letter:
· An apology
· An explanation of your situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to let you know that I have decided to move ahead this time with JP Morgan instead of your company's job offer, although it was you only who processed my offer letter within 3 working days.
Secondly, I would like to present my sincerest apologies for abandoning your offer and accepting theirs. This is because of the wonderful and one in a life time opportunity which I am getting at the moment out of this job.
Thirdly, I would like to let you know that they are giving me the valuable chance to work from our headquarters office based in Toronto Canada and on top of that they are offering sponsorship for me to move to Canada. Finally, I don't want to do this injustice with me for which I would regret in my life.
Yours faithfully
Faizal Reza
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| 2017-03-12 | FaizalReza | 22 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...s because of the wonderful and one in a life time opportunity which I am getting at the m...
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Line 7, column 230, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ip for me to move to Canada. Finally, I dont want to do this injustice with me for w...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, you know, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 660.0 1615.20841683 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 148.0 315.596192385 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45945945946 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42050378399 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655405405405 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 506.74238477 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5319852816 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174211928654 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078942893335 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694241403623 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115833663685 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778969288303 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.