It is often said that retirement is the happiest time of a person’s life. How far do you agree with this view?
Firstly, Retirement helps people to embark on the journey of personal interests, which can be going on a vacation, spending time with relatives or schedule things on their own. This helps them to identify the list of activities they want to opt for throughout the year
Secondly, Retired people who has a better income plan, can enjoy more benefits of life. They seem to have multiple sources of income like fixed pension, fixed premium and monthly return on fixed deposits. It gives a sense of accomplishment to retired people as they become more self-dependent and less burden on their children’s.
Thirdly, perhaps many old age people in America volunteer to become more involved in the community work to bring a new lease of life especially for low-income children with no accessibility to education. Therefore, it produces a sense of good feeling and mirth in the retired people. For instance, a recent study made by the IMF shows that about 60% of retired individuals pledge to teach for America cause, which is mainly for disabled children’s.
Fourthly, MNC companies always lookout for retired person with management and consulting background to fill in the top management positions. In addition to this, companies offer them better perks, financial rewards and a hefty bonus at the end of every financial year.
However, it is true that retired people frequently suffer from the lack of finances, which make them dependent on their children. Another potential cause is isolation and lack of negligence which can be another detriment factor in their retired life. Despite all of this, it seems that benefits of retirement outweigh the negative effects of individual’s life after retirement.
To conclude, it can be said that if individuals contemplate and plan for their retirement in advance, then it can be more rewarding and fulfilling to them in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 156, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...e more rewarding and fulfilling to them in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, for instance, in addition, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20327868852 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95821296027 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2504988265 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.076923077 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177442875481 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666691091026 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395698159957 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915028485899 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263593624302 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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