Some people believe that confidence wins bigger games that knowledge alone cannot. Also, that accumulating knowledge makes no sense until one has the confidence to put it to use.
Is it true that knowledge will help one win a struggle only if it is put into practice with full confidence, or is it confidence without knowledge that is null and void?
Some people argue that confidence plays a vital role to get success rather than knowledge and there is no value of knowledge if we do not have confidence. As per my opinion, confidence and knowledge both play equal role to achieve success and both are heavily dependent on each others. This essay will discuss about importance of both with relative examples.
Firstly, even if we have extensive knowledge, we can not achieve our goals if we do not have confidence. Confidence extracts best effort from us which is important to win the race. For example, many poor African Nations are well behind in the International Sports but they are master in long distance running competitions as they have high confidence in such sports compare to other games. Hence, Confidence can help us to achieve success more easily even if we do not have enough knowledge.
Secondly, confidence without knowledge can not help us to cross winning line because we can not estimate risk and efforts we require for specific task if we do not have enough information. For instance, in many cases, with over confidence we take specific task without prior research and in the end we can not able to complete that task. So, there is no value of confidence if we do not have sufficient knowledge.
In conclusion, confidence and knowledge are the main pillar of success and we can not achieve our goals without any of them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'extracts the best'.
Suggestion: extracts the best
...f we do not have confidence. Confidence extracts best effort from us which is important to wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84166666667 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65956084512 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 377.1 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7747804673 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.636363636 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.25397266985 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165403920451 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806722690861 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590220291797 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119618617838 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043384962539 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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