The maps below show changes in the Borrowmeade area in recent times. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate the main developments which have taken place in the Borrowmeade area between 1990 and today.
In general, it seems that Borrowmeade has been modernised, with improved transport, accommodation, communication, entertainment, shopping and sports facilities. There also appears to have been significant population growth in the area as Borrowmeade is now a town rather than a village.
One significant change is that Fickledore Forest has been cleared and replaced by a new climbing center. Furthermore, the area to the north of the town centre, which was a picnic and play area in 1990, has been developed into a holiday park.
Another interesting change is that the transport links have been upgraded. In 1990, Borrowmeade had a bus stop. Today, it has a bus and rail service.A further transport development is that Village Road has been turned into a motorway. To the south of the motorway, the Borrowmeade Ski Centre has been redeveloped into a large winter sports facility.
Notably, a phone tower has been erected to the south-east of the town to provide a better communication infrastructure. There has also been redevelopment to the west of the town centre, where Prichard's Farmhouse has been knocked down and replaced by a modern cinema. Finally, the cornershop to the north-east of the town centre has been transformed into a department store.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...p. Today, it has a bus and rail service.A further transport development is that V...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, if, so, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20720720721 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14907071628 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536036036036 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1951741282 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0977915857166 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426029410171 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383185175239 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0699630224938 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425060974322 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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