Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Who has not feel the contamination around the city where lives? Do you think this is a result from the nature itself? Think about it and you probable realize that human beings are very involved in this problem. As well as this problem, there are other problems in our planet that humans are been involved, which make the Earth harmed. I strongly believe that human activity is destroying our planet, each time worse. Although they try to make some solutions for these problems, our planet is going to a complete chaos and destruction.
First and foremost, do you know where humans get their raw ma...
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Sentence: Think about it and you probable realize that human beings are very involved in this problem.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to you and probable
Sentence: As a result, the mankind is dangered as well because they breath and consume in some way these products.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to they and breath
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