TPO-20 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I definitely that successful people try new thing and take risk rather than ordinary people. I have many reason for my stance which will elaborate in the following paragraphs.
First of all, trying new things causes addresses new problem. In globalized world anything is changed. All situations are not stable and every time we face with new problem like air pollution, financial problems, global warming. These huge problems need to men try new thing to get prosperity and can solve them. Successful people like as scientists and engineers and entrepreneurs try take new risk and doing hazard methods to present new strategies to upgrade life level and make more satisfy in the humankind. For instance, it is necessary for scientists to take risk and find proper solution to make vaccine for HIV disease.
Another reason to substantiate my standpoint is that trying new things help to more learn and expand spectrum understanding. Nowadays technologies progress every time. It would be very important for people to be up to date and innovative, if they want to be prosperous in their work and possibly education. Get new experience and things can assist men to increase their knowledge to choice best way in their business.
Last but not least, these days, all companies and people compete with each other to make more money and be famed. In this competition world, time saving can help somebody to earn more profit. Try new thing may waste some time, but I still agree that successful men try new things and encounter with new risk. Although doing what you previously know should save time, it is no grantee your success
To sum up, I believe that for reaching to achievement it is necessary people challenge with new obstacles and try take risk, because this is make them innovative. The world need to people have guts to take risk. Beside all the time lost, for instance, will be compensated by testing new thing and offering new product to the market.
To put it in nutshell, all men should bear in their mind, people cannot be prosperous unless they take risk and get new experience. participation of learning and creativity are two prime and conspicuous support.
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- TPO-20 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- TPO-20 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-20 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 67
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 3, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
I definitely that successful people try new thing and tak...
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Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
...isk rather than ordinary people. I have many reason for my stance which will elaborate in t...
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Line 6, column 132, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Participation
... they take risk and get new experience. participation of learning and creativity are two prim...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, still, for instance, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93732970027 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65821935174 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544959128065 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5621831642 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.35 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277903061162 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860509714234 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792865540995 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15886269155 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558755276678 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.