Machine translation is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role for humans. Do you agree or disagree ?
it has been extremely debatable that wether expansion of machines to serve the purpose of translation is capable enough to take place of human manual translaters or not . Although assistance of technlogy to bring work at ease is terrific however, man translation abilities can never be underestimated. Here, I would like to discord with given statement.
There are multifarious points to support my views. First and foremost, majority of people associated with employment of translation might be jobless due to machines. Therefore, government already facing problem of fulfilling employment require...
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Are you serious to compare
Are you serious to compare you (as a trainer) to your students?
Sentence: Furthermore, human
Sentence: Furthermore, human have more flexibility and accuracy than machines.
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by a verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or
Suggestion: Refer to human and have
Sentence: it has been extremely debatable that wether expansion of machines to serve the purpose of translation is capable enough to take place of human manual translaters or not .
Error: wether Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: translaters Suggestion: translates
Sentence: Although assistance of technlogy to bring work at ease is terrific however, man translation abilities can never be underestimated.
Error: technlogy Suggestion: technology
flaws:
No. of Words: 234 350
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.036 0.07
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 234 350
No. of Characters: 1302 1500
No. of Different Words: 154 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.911 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.564 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.003 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 103 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 85 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.363 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.692 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.327 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.599 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.036 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
sir why my score is very less
sir why my score is very less ????? tell me coprehensively????
When the words are less than
When the words are less than 250, means the mark is going to less than 6.0.
ohhhhhhhhh if I would have
ohhhhhhhhh if I would have written 325 words ...how much could I get from above essay according to language structure and representation ??????
ohhhhhhhhh if I would have
ohhhhhhhhh if I would have written 325 words ...how much could I get from above essay according to language structure and representation ??????
and could I add one more body para if you please dont mind evaluating score once again ????
n are my ideas relevant and
n are my ideas relevant and solid or not m???
You may change a bit of your
You may change a bit of your writing style to get better relevant like this:
Para 1: introduction. my choice: A or B. agree or disagree.
Para 2:First,reason 1 (1 sentence) + why reason 1(some arguments. 2-3 sentences) + examples for reason 1 (around 2 sentences) + small conclusions (like advantages of reason 1 or comparisons if not reason 1, 1-2 sentences).
Para 3:Second,reason 2 ,blabla... do the same thing like First
Para 4:Third, reason 3 blabla... do the same thing like First but shorter
Para 5: Conclusion.
In your essay body, you only give an example after topic sentence, there are no 'why reason 1' and 'small conclusion', that's the reason Coherence is low.
sir please check my essay now
sir please check my essay now ...
soon if u can becoz jst today I have to give it to my students
Sentence: Furthermore, human
Sentence: Furthermore, human have more flexibility and accuracy than machines.
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by a verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or
Suggestion: Refer to human and have
Sentence: it has been extremely debatable that wether expansion of machines to serve the purpose of translation is capable enough to take place of human manual translaters or not .
Error: wether Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: translaters Suggestion: translators
Sentence: Although assistance of technlogy to bring work at ease is terrific however, man translation abilities can never be underestimated.
Error: technlogy Suggestion: technology
Sentence: Thence, hiring employees for typewriting seems more economical than machines so, human translation can not be disappeard on account of machines.
Error: disappeard Suggestion: disappeared
flaws:
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.048 0.07
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 311 350
No. of Characters: 1718 1500
No. of Different Words: 192 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.199 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.524 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.048 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 135 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 111 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 87 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 62 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.438 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.937 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.326 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.605 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.048 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
sir please provide my essay
sir please provide my essay sticky icon n 10 points too .
sir how my representation of ideas different or better than Naveena gill's representation ????