The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar graphs below compare the kinds of music albums bought by a variety of people from different age and gender in Britain. It can be clearly seen that males spend more money than females on all three music albums described on the graphs.
According to the first graph, just over 20% of males buy Pop Music, while only 12% women spend money on this. Moreover, 30% of people who are between 25 and 34 years followed by people 16-24 years old (just under 30 %) prefer this type of music albums, however this figure for 45+ constitutes only 5%. When it comes to Rock albums, male also outnumbers fe...
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