what do most people consider as important when deciding on a job or a career?
Today's compitative world, there are lot of jobs available. selecting a better career or a better job is one's own decision and which may include some criteria as well. in this essay we can do a perfect analysis in depth.
Firstly, while deciding to get a desirable job, almost all people are looking remuneration for their dedication. If you have a higher remuneration your life is settled at a great extent because, today's world need a higher income for the survilance.
Secondly, job facilities are the important one. nowadays, most of the companies providing good amanities with remuneration because, all of these companies are in a rat race to fulfill their requirements or profits. most people are well educated and hiring to get a perfect job for their life settlement. people are ready to work hardly and to do over times to keeping their stand in each field. if they will get more income, they are ready to spend more time for their work field.
In conclusion, even though people need a perfect education for a better career,to stay their desirable job is his own interest. such type of interest always depends on the facilities and these facilities must keep their life more easy. in this developing world, there are lots of chances to get a better job, but to stay in that job is always depends on demanding. as far as I'm concern, to continue with a desirable job, people always looking the amanities and remuneration because these two are the basic needs for their survilance and for keeping one's life in a satisfactory manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79323308271 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68174788572 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515037593985 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4786121498 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0714285714 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198983254624 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796813293133 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557331014563 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121186496722 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250506854697 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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