TPO 27 integrated writing : Little Ice Age
In the reading, the author claims that the cause of the abnormal little ice age is known through three viable reasons mentioned which was occurred from 1350 until 1900 C.E. However, finding all the ideas questionable and implausible, the lecturer totally casts doubt on what is claimed in the text and present some evidence to the contrary.
At first, the author argues that the cold current which entered into the gulf steam due to unexpected warm weather before little ice age was the main responsible for occurring this phenomenon. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that if this current been this cold stream would have effected only Europe and North American, whereas the ice age observed on southern hemisphere such as News land and South Africa. Thus, there is not any rational paraphrase for the little ice age which is associated to these regions.
In addition, the reading passage holds the view that the sunlight which had been obstructed owing to the clouds of dust, coming from vast volcanic eruption, can be legitimate reason for such a cool climate in that era. On the other hand, the lecturer disputes this point by clarifying the fact that although scientifically, dust could bring such ramification, if volcanic eruption had been the cause, it would have been accompanies by some visual effects such as colorful sunset and gray or brown snow instead of white; while no record showed such harbingers. Therefore, the volcanic activities were not strong enough to generate this cool environment.
Finally, the author asserts that decreasing the population and its subsequent environmental impact is to blame for cool climate. The lecturer, though, dismisses it by pointing out that in spite of the fact that the decrease in the numbers of people is true it by no means did not last long enough to be in impactful as the multitude of people soon rebounded. Consequently, they needed to cut the trees in order to clear the fields and prepare sufficient food for the growing population. Obviously, the forests could not render weather cold that much.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, finally, first, however, if, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, in addition, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1373.03311258 126% => OK
No of words: 345.0 270.72406181 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01449275362 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62595578263 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 145.348785872 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 419.366225166 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 21.2450331126 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.2657234306 49.2860985944 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.272727273 110.228320801 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3636363636 21.698381199 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0909090909 7.06452816374 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360579184242 0.272083759551 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118150163588 0.0996497079465 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630454008951 0.0662205650399 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185627397116 0.162205337803 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792393610856 0.0443174109184 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.3589403974 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 53.8541721854 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.0289183223 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 63.6247240618 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.7273730684 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.498013245 137% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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