the chart and line graph
The table shows how much money people in Britain spent per week on three different types of group and the line graph illustrates how often people ate fast foods between 1970 and 1990.It is clear that expenditure on fast foods depended on personal income and pizza was the highest consumption item in 1970 , but in later year fish and chips became the most consumed item in 1990.
We can see the line graph, in 1970 Pizza consumption was the highest in three different fast foods groups with 300 gm per person and there are 80 gm per person of average income who liked eating Hamburger.In 20 years period , pizza and hamburger decreased significantly , but fish and chips became the highest consumption in Britain.
According the table graph , in high income group , people tended to consume Hamburger approximately 41 pence per week. Person in average income liked consuming Hamburger and Fish and chips .The number of people eating pizza in low income group was the lowest about 6 pence per week.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...le ate fast foods between 1970 and 1990.It is clear that expenditure on fast foods...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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...was the highest consumption item in 1970 , but in later year fish and chips became...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...erage income who liked eating Hamburger.In 20 years period , pizza and hamburger d...
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Line 2, column 223, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...iked eating Hamburger.In 20 years period , pizza and hamburger decreased significa...
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...za and hamburger decreased significantly , but fish and chips became the highest c...
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... in Britain. According the table graph , in high income group , people tended to...
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...g the table graph , in high income group , people tended to consume Hamburger appr...
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...d consuming Hamburger and Fish and chips .The number of people eating pizza in low...
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Suggestion: The
...consuming Hamburger and Fish and chips .The number of people eating pizza in low in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87058823529 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44170566011 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535294117647 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.829413182 43.030603864 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 207.0 112.824112599 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.5 22.9334400587 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100760017717 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067704532433 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393296884397 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764662357239 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240977426343 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 13.2329268293 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.77 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 11.4329268293 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.