These days, many people actively support or promote a good cause, whether a worldwide concern, such as animal welfare or environmental awareness, or a local cause, such as the care of their local children’s play area, or the cleaning up of graffiti in their town centre.
You are actively involved in promoting and supporting a good cause. Write an article for your local newspaper to convince readers to support your cause.
It is our pleasure to note that many people have recently come forward to support our charitable programmes. It is our pleasure to share with our readers that people, irrespective of their ages and genders, seem to be eager to lend their helping hand in our activities.In this letter, I would like to present accomplishments of our organisation and urge the esteemed readers to participate in different activities depending on their interests. Our organization is benevolently supported by national government with allocation of funds for the improvement of living conditions in the slum areas.
One of the important things that participants can do is to support our charitable organization financially. Your financial support will make sure that we can fulfill our promises without any hurdles.
Secondly, the local residents can explore the possibility to be a volunteer with us. It is no secret that we need a large number of young people to properly manage our relief and charity work. Our volunteers will be responsible for transferring of books, food items, utensils etc. from one place to another. If you have any vehicle, you may bring it along with it as it will significantly enhance the effectiveness of our work.
To sum up, my sincere appeal to all of the readers is to come forward and contribute to ameliorate the living and working conditions in our sub-urban areas. I would also like to request people to contact us at our office if you wish to donate anything to us. We are looking forward to seeing your active participation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...nd their helping hand in our activities.In this letter, I would like to present ac...
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Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...r with us. It is no secret that we need a large number of young people to properly manage our rel...
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Line 7, column 33, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ork. To sum up, my sincere appeal to all of the readers is to come forward and contribu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03100775194 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06888641339 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4627981077 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8461538462 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0669118976735 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0263737648427 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0205486727913 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0416660102102 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0140870688963 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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