Write about the following topic.
It has been noted that many people who had a big impact on the world gave themselves completely to their work and did not bother with the idea of “work-life balance”. To what extent should people try to have a good work-life balance?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
It is extremely important to have a right balance between our work life and leisure activities. Although there may be few people around us who give extreme priority to their office work, I feel that we can have a meaningful and satisfied life only if we are able to maintain a healthy balance in our activities.
First, proper rest and leisure activities such as relaxing on weekends are essential in anyone's life. It helps us to rejuvenate and get ready for another work day, and also make our day extremely productive. Because of lack of balance between work and other activities, we are likely to feel bored and sleepy at work. The muscle fatigue that slowly creeps in also rediuces our productivity. For example, pilots are constantly monitored by airline companies and are even advised to rest so that they can perform to the best of their abilities.
Second, our personal health, family, friends and people around us are equally important much like our work. It is important that we need to socialise and get strenth and inspiration from other's success and it is important that we share ideas with people from different walk of life. Therefore, we need to have sufficient time to be around people who matter us most. That helps to forge a long lasting bond.
in conclusion, peoper balance between work and family life is a key to performing well in our employment. Without work life balance, our life is likely to get affected which can have multiple repurcussions at our health and overall performance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...elps to forge a long lasting bond. in conclusion, peoper balance between work...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, for example, i feel, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9111969112 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64974031107 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555984555985 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6462379002 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8461538462 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213164165829 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821338873697 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559792228442 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146142835406 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030542748438 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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