The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashion one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
Some people think that having a career is enough to them, whereas other people find that the new fashion will be to have several careers or ways earning money and education will be continued throughout life. However, I believe that focusing on a single career not an old fashion and it is also the good chance to improve our skills.
The first reason why we should choose a stable job is having thorough insights into fields which we are doing. For example, people working in Information Technology have a large knowledge about electronic devices. They can not turn on doing musician, artist or vet. As a matter of fact, each fields bring different comprehansion and people who working at each jobs will accumulate more experiencce by not the same ways. As we can see, a reporter will be trained communicating skills, consequently becoming a church will be improved writing skills.
Another benefit of having a single career is getting productive working life. For example, a famous singer in Vietnam can earn 80 millions dong just by singing a song when they have well voice and professional vocal technique. If you have knowledgeability about your job, you will be got a promotion. The salary of the beginner is often low, then climbing dramatically when you have adequately experience. Money which you earned is enough to serve demand of life. Those are getting marry, buying houses, cars or even travelling around the world.
In conclusion, choosing a career and making a living with it is an important decision in a person’s life. Stable job is still a good chance to help life better but it is just really effective when you have passion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'experienced'.
Suggestion: experienced
...g dramatically when you have adequately experience. Money which you earned is enough to se...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, really, so, still, then, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8896797153 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72433817005 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608540925267 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0370763933 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433228022034 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122073592836 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139209069016 0.0667982634062 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268505419638 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.194201405344 0.056905535591 341% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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