Write a letter to the publisher in a newspaper, asking to advertise a meeting of people from different countries you are organizing. Explain where, when and why.
Hello Mr. Robert,
I am Divya Patel, chairman of Vibrant Gujarat. I am writing this letter to request you to publish an advertisement in your newspaper regarding an upcoming meeting about International Trade.
This meeting would take place in Mahatma Gandhi Hall, Gandhinagar at 10am on 5th June, 2017. We have invited CEO's of the Top MNC's from 12 different countries to convince them to invest and setup their plants in our state as this is very important for overall development of our country and its also helps government to overcome the issue of unemployment. As a Chairman, I request your team to publish advertisement for the same and also invited you to personally attend this meeting so you can share the outcome of this meeting with general people through your newspaper.
Moreover, we hope that this meeting will become favorable for economic development of our state and county.
I am waiting for the advertisement for this meeting soon in your newspaper.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Kind Regards,
Divya Patel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 82, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'June 2017'.
Suggestion: June 2017
...Gandhi Hall, Gandhinagar at 10am on 5th June, 2017. We have invited CEOs of the Top MNCs f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11046511628 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78164106988 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633720930233 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.3333333333 44.8134815571 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6666666667 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232106054507 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882911661749 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725855132537 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126204022749 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527523845482 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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