In a war of ideas, it is people who get killed”. Does a common man suffer from a group’s ideology? Express your opinion, and support the same with reasons and examples.
Mankind survives and functions well in groups which fortify mutual respect, understanding and exchange of ideas among each other. Numerous groups are formed in the world based on caste,color, nationalities and religion which often result in conflicts and violence when they fail to control their enthusiasm; therefore I am in consummately accord with this statement that a common man has to pay the price of a group’s ideology.
A group’s viewpoints always influence others in both positive and negative way and often lead to social disharmony for which a common man suffers, for instance terrorism based on religion leads to hatred and racist attacks against every sophisticated person belong to that religion. Apart from this, world wars were also a result of different national groups.
Politics and religion are the dominating factors responsible for creating groups and manipulating its members by giving wrong directions. Therefore, these political and religious leaders instill negative reinforcements in mind of members and make them perform anti social activities which cause deaths of common men, women and children but the main culprits are always hiding in high security buildings.
In short, every individual has distinguished ideas and uniqueness it is not always necessary that he supports the group, so he becomes the sufferer. Having a common notion is not bad but acquisition of false and misleading information among group is always disastrous and destructive for mankind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , color
...s are formed in the world based on caste,color, nationalities and religion which often...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, apart from, as to, for instance, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54112554113 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97006926597 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658008658009 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.5392002411 50.4703680194 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.0 104.977214359 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.875 20.9669160288 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.25397266985 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146262139916 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588127538551 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036383093685 0.071462118173 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849168848434 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369599227982 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 12.6369458128 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 53.1260098522 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 11.5310837438 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 8.32886699507 126% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.5123152709 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.