These days, there is ongoing debate among people that that war that originated due to difference of ideas or belief has negative effect on common man. This statement is actually makes sense as at the end only common people suffers. This essay will discuss the reasons that why in ideological wars, its people who suffers a most.
To commence with, there are myriad reasons that state that group beliefs are only for their self interest. It can be proven from the point that they fight only for their benefits. To give an illustration, during partition, both India and Pakistan has lost a large amount of lives and money. Therefore, it can be taken into account that the leaders who make people fought on basis of beliefs, only take advantage of common people.
Furthermore, group’s ideology only misguides the common man and makes them fight with each other. This not only disturbs peach and harmony of the societies but also hampers the growth of every community. For instance, when two countries fight over religious differences, it is army and common personnel suffer a lot. Hence, it can be concluded from the above that people should not come under influence of any group ideas.
To recapitulate, this essay discussed that group ideology misguide the public and are only for their own self interest. Therefore, I would strongly recommend that people should not come under their influence and live life with peace.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... influence and live life with peace.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02928870293 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44118505332 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610878661088 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 4.6157635468 238% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.8276598386 50.4703680194 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.4615384615 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237045687986 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827893703411 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627067247402 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143677134661 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569632501615 0.0609392437508 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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