These days there is ongoing debate going on between people that whether tourism is beneficial for people or it has disadvantages.Tourism can proved to be boon to the economy of the nation if it is well implemented. This essay will discuss the reasons that why tourism has myriad advantages and if fruitful for country's in every terms.
To commence with, Tourism brings lots of foreign currency in the nation which can help in growth of the country.Moreover, it give lots of employment to indigenous people as they can be employed in hotels and travel agency.For instance, in Europe the mostly revenue comes through tourism industry. Hence, it can inferred that there are many advantages of tourism industry.
Those who argue for its cons have a different view and say that it can also be a threat to local cultures of the nation. Foreign people can change the mindset the local people and as well as can affect the local culture. However, the advantages that nation gets by tourism is far more than its demerits such that it help in maintenance of the environment and landscape.
To recapitulate , this essay discussed both the merits and demerits of tourism industry .In my opinion,tourism helps in sustainable development of a nation and i would strongly recommend that its advantages outweighs its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04566210046 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05314835474 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561643835616 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.3445531813 50.4703680194 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.125 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.375 20.9669160288 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.625 7.25397266985 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210847735512 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945993600546 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317528579786 0.071462118173 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127978570204 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301185770536 0.0609392437508 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.94827586207 196% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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