These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about the most vital invention of this century.In this tech-savvy era , there are many inventions which have changed the man-kind tremendously.Some people claim that airplanes is the most imperative inventions while some argue that computer is the most indispensable discovery.This essay will discuss that why computer is most important invention till now.
To commence with, while there are many numerous ground reasons to support the belief that computer is most significant one. Computers have drastcially reduced the complex computational work into simpler form.This greatly help humans in every field whether medicine, engineering etcetera.To instance, computers have been used in every workplace such as offices, booking centers.Hence, it can be taken into account that computer is greatest inventions of 20th century.
Furthermore, Computer works at faster rate and is very accurate because there is no human intervention.Nowadays all work is automated and it is only possible only with the advent of computer.A tangible example from a scientific research undertaken by prestigious university asserted that computer have greatly helped in all spectrum of work across globe.Therefore, there is no doubt about contribution of computers in the society.
To recapitulate , this essay has discussed that computer have made work simpler and increased our efficiency rapidly.Therefore, in my opinion, computer has revolutionalised the entrie world and is a boon to humans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, while, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76991150442 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39456683921 2.71678728327 125% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632743362832 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.5024630542 219% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.717142823 50.4703680194 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 260.8 104.977214359 248% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.2 20.9669160288 216% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.6 7.25397266985 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.33497536946 337% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0812357717886 0.242375264174 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383986735144 0.0925447433944 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470656852409 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0447145538739 0.151781067708 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452186457328 0.0609392437508 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.3 12.6369458128 224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.88 53.1260098522 17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 10.9458128079 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.07 11.5310837438 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.11 8.32886699507 133% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.3980295567 192% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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