These days there is ongoing debate between people that whether parents should be held responsible for their children’s act or not .While some people have a point that every person should be held responsible only for their own actions. This essay will discuss the reasons that why parents should be held accountable for their children acts.
First and Foremost, children learn everything from their home and especially from their parents. So if they do something good or bad, responsibility should come on the shoulder of the parents. To give an illustration, in my colony, few months back a child under age 18 was driving a car and crushed two people . Hence, it is clear that without the consent of parents , child cannot drive the car , so parents should be held indirectly for every actions of their offspring.
Furthermore, it is mostly parents who unknowingly make their children bad for societies. By giving them ample love and affection, they make insensitive to other people’s pains. To instance, ample evidence from a number of studies suggests that in criminal cases of children, their parents were indirectly involved by not appropriately guiding them. Therefore, it can be concluded that with no doubt parents should be held for their children’s act.
To recapitulate, this essay discussed that children learn everything from parents and sometimes parents does not guide them properly. Therefore, I would strongly recommend that parents or guardians should be held for children’s acts as they are their responsbility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, while, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99243951971 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589430894309 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4362266623 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.498621940797 0.242375264174 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207487831889 0.0925447433944 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146813329688 0.071462118173 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.348386510854 0.151781067708 230% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103744061172 0.0609392437508 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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