Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion?
Parents should be held accountable for offsprings’ activities by law because it will encourage them to discipline their children and teach them etiquettes, manners and value of jurisdiction. I am in consummate accord with the given statement.
Parents must watch their children and evaluate their behaviour so that they can modify it in socially and legally acceptable manner and instil sophistication in their thoughts to make them the better citizen of the nation. It is only possible if the legal system makes them fully responsible for every positive and negative task their children do and require answers for that.
Children’s minds are innocent and free from any prejudice, therefore, they cannot understand repercussions of their actions which may lead to wrongful acts which may cause deterioration in their development or disharmony in society. Moreover, parents will also become negligent if there is no legal force on them. For instance, in a recent incident in a zoo, a gorilla was killed by zoo authorities because a baby went to his accommodation due to the inattention of parents.
In brief, laws and policies should be formulated and implemented in which parents should be given written guidelines for the upbringing of their children in a healthy way and they should be penalised for children’s negative deeds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a healthy way" with adverb for "healthy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36150234742 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16106462513 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629107981221 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.7665140858 50.4703680194 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.75 104.977214359 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 20.9669160288 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407656514961 0.242375264174 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157154065629 0.0925447433944 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116744810194 0.071462118173 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250718568108 0.151781067708 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805556264483 0.0609392437508 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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