It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Marrying in younger age has become increasingly common in recent times. Although the many of them get married while studying and establish their career successfully, there are numerous difficulties related to their marriage. This essay will discuss the problems related to marriage while in school.

People who get married while a study is may be challenging than other students those who are unmarried. Marriage life demands couples to spend some time to their relationship, however, college students require allocating enough time to their study. For example, if students cannot spend time on their learning activities, their grades may drop or even fail their exams. Being married in college is much more difficult than unmarried colleagues.

People who get married while you study is more difficult because marriage makes mental pressure on them especially when young people financially dependent on their parents. Financial dependency creates the greater problem for married students such as tuition fee or living expenses. For instance, living as married couple itself demands financial resource at least to survive. However, college students often unable to earn adequate amount of income. Therefore, financial pressure leads their marriage more troublesome and mental hardship.

This essay discussed how marriage life could make an impact on students’ academic abilities and their mental health. In my opinion, get married before finishing college has several disadvantages.

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Average: 8.8 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, while, at least, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 31.9359605911 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76126126126 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70264639581 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.67573268 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3571428571 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.25397266985 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127179982069 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532036463885 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657460062073 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092623290855 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314599185132 0.0609392437508 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 53.1260098522 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.83 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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